both school and parents should take the responsibility to conduct the children
     some people say parents should take the responsibility to conduct their children＇s behaviour, and tell them what is right or wrong, others say that it is the school＇s responsibility.
     in my opinion, it is both the school＇s and the parents＇responsibities, for the parents are closer to their children than any other person. they can influence their children every day,especially the mothers, who are the children＇s first teachers,can influence their children most. so the parents are playing a very important role in conducting their children what is wrong or right.
     the school, which is the children＇s second teacher, is becoming more and more important. some children may always consider their teacher＇s behaviour to be right and do exactly what the teacher instructs them do.
   from this we can conclude that school and parents should both take the responsibility to conduct the children. only in this way, can we make our children behave well in future. obviously this is the best way we can take at present.
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    文章简明扼要，直切主题，表达了自己的观点：父母和学校应该共同负责任规范孩子的言行，并举出了论据，最后又重申了观点。文章首尾呼应，有理有据，语言流畅，是标准的好议论文。
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学校和父母双方都应对孩子负责任
  有些人说父母应负责规范子女的言行，并教导他们如何分辨是非。有些人则认为这是学校的责任。
   我认为，这是父母和学校双方的责任。因为，父母同孩子的关系比其它任何人都亲密。他们每天都影响着自己的孩子。尤其是作为孩子首任教师的母亲对孩子的影响最大。所以，父母在教导子女认识错与对的过程中起着非常重要的作用。
    学校是孩子的第二位教师。它已变得越来越重要了。有些孩子认为教师的言行是对的，而且对教师的要求言听计从。由此看来，我们可以说学校和父母双方都应对孩子负责任。很显然，这才是我们目前能采取的最好办法。