a good teacher is like a shining star to students. miss li, my senior high school english teacher, is a shining star in my life.
when i began my senior high school years, i had difficulty in learning english. i dared not speak english aloud in public because of my poor pronunciation and intonation. i could not get high marks and my grammar was not right at all. frustrated and afraid of being laughed at, i never put up my hand to answer questions in english class. when miss li found out my situation, she encouraged me and lent me a hand. she patiently taught me english grammar, helped me understand how to write a good sentence,and lent me many english books and magazines, which rapidly improved my english. with her help, i became interested in english and eventually got high marks.
miss li, like a shining star, shines in my path of success.

一个好老师对学生来说就像一颗闪亮的星。李老师，我高中时的英语老师，就是我生命中一颗闪亮的星。
刚上高中时，我英语学得很吃力。我不敢在公开场合开口说英语，因为我的语音、语调很糟糕。英语成绩很差’，语法一蹋糊涂。灰心、失望、羞于被嘲笑，所以英语课上我从来不单手回答问题。李老师发现我的情况后，向我伸出了援助之手，鼓励我。她认真地教我语法，教我如何写好句子，还借给我许多英语书和杂志。这一切都使得我很快提高了英语水平。在她的帮助下，我渐渐对英语感兴趣了，成绩也提高了。
李老师，就像一颗闪亮的星照耀着我前进的道路。

a good teacher is like a shining star to students. my senior high school english teacher called miss li is such a shining star in my life.
when i began my study in senior high school, i came across difficulty in my english study and i was one of the weakest sudents in english in my class. fortunately, miss li lent me a hand. she introduced to me the way of english study and created a lot of chances for me to practise my spoken english in class. with her help, i caught up with my classmates in english. i became interested in english. from then on english has been my favorite subject.
miss li, like a shining star, shines on my way to success.

一个好老师对学生采说就像一颗闪亮的星。我高中时的英语老师，李老师就是我生命中一颗闪亮的星。
我刚上高中时；英语学得很吃力，是班上英语最差的学生之一。幸运的是，李老师及时帮助了我。她向我介绍学英语的方法，创造许多机会让我在课上练习口语。在她的帮助下，我的英语学习终于赶了上来。我开始对英语感兴趣了。从那之后，英语一直就是我最喜欢的学科。
李老师就像一颗闪亮的星照亮了我前进的道路