it was my birthday yesterday. i got a lot of gifts. all of them were covered with coloured paper. among them there were two interesting ones.
my elder sister gave me a round paper bag and i thought it was a football. but when i opened it, it turned out to be a clock. my brother gave me a message, saying that 'my present has been put in your bedroom. 'as soon as i went into my bedroom, i found a box. i opened it and found a laptop. i was very happy.
these two presents aim to let me study hard and not to waste time.

昨天是我的生日，我收到了很多礼物。它们用彩纸包着，其中有两件有趣的东西。
我姐姐送了我一个圆纸包，开始我认为是个足球，但打开后才发现是一个闹钟。我哥给我留了张条，告诉我：“我的礼物已经放在你的卧室里了。”我走进卧室，发现一个盒子。我打开了它，里面是一台笔记本电脑。我非常高兴。
这两件礼物是为了让我好好学习，抓紧时间。

yesterday was my birthday and i received a lot of presents. these presents were packed in coloured paper and two of them were funny and interesting, which impressed me.
my sister sent a bag of present to me. the bag was big and round. i though it was a football. but when i opened it, i saw a clock. the other one was given by my brother. he left me a message, which said 'my present is lying in your bedroom'. when i got to my bedroom, i found a laptop. oh!great!' i jumped with joy. i know, they want me to study hard and not to waste time.
i would never forget this birthday.

昨天是我的生日，我收到了许多生日礼物，并且这些礼物都用彩纸包着。其中两件礼物很好玩很有趣，给我留下了很深的印象。
我姐姐送给我一个包，这包又大又圆。我认为是足球，可打开一看是个闹钟。另外一件礼物是我哥哥送给我的，他给我留了一张纸条，上面写着：“我的礼物放在你的卧室里。”当我进入卧室时，我看到了一台笔记本电脑。噢!真是太棒了!我高兴地跳了起来-。我明白他们想让我努力学习，不要浪费时间。
我将永远不会忘记昨天。