《my family》修改稿
my family my family has four people. they’re my parents, my sister and me. my mother is a good mother. she is 39 years old. she has many things to do every day: washing clothes, cooking dinner and cleaning our room. she is tired everyday. my father is a worker. he often works a whole day. sometimes, he does not work. he is 37 years old. my sister and i are students. she is in class 1, grade 3 and i am in class 2, grade 7. after school, we often do our homework. then we play computer or watch tv. i love my family! 注:原文受到英语作文批改网:的教师修改,特此鸣谢。原文批改地址: