【例一】

post office box 2418

branch 28-5

post code 100081

beijing, p.r.c.

november 12, 1997

the registrar of admission

the graduate school of

the pennsylvania state university

u.s.a. 16802

dear sir:

i am deeply interested in your graduate school in the department of mechanicalengineering, and plan to apply for admission for the fall of 1998. my gpa in the university was 3.5, and i plan to take toefl and gre in october and december, 1997, respectively.

please send catalog and application forms to me. i shall be greatly appreciated.

very truly yours,

wang yang

【例二】

department of applied physics

tsinghua university, 100084

beijing, china

sept. 11th, 1999

re: applying for admittance

office of graduate admissions

boston university

massachusetts, u.s.a.

dear sir,

i am writing in the hope that i may obtain an opportunity to further my study in applied physics toward master degree in your university.

my name is li jin, an undergraduate student of the department of applied physics, tsinghua university(china). next year in the summer, i will graduate and get my bs degree. i plan to continue my study and research in this field under the instructions of firstclass professors and in a dynamic academic atmosphere. i chose boston university because there are a congenial team of researchers, an array of databases and research projects in your school of physics. i believe my interests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the school. and my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.

i will appreciate it very much if you could send me the graduate application forms, the application form for scholarships/assistantships, a detailed introduction to the school of physics, and other relevant information. my mailing address is shown on the top of this letter.

i am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

sincerely yours,

li jin

【例三】

english college

beijing foreign language university

beijing 100083

p.r. china

june 16, 1999

office of admission

huntington university

dear sir,

thank you for your letter and the application forms. enclosed you will find the completed forms and three checks (80 dollars) for the application fee and the first months rent for dormitory. the additional 5 dollars will be deposited at your college. i shall appreciate any favorable action you might take in admitting me to your college for the spring semester of 1998. i am most anxious to hear from you soon.

sincerely yours，

zhao pengfei

【例四】

department of finance and econmics

shanghai jiaotong university

shanghai 200043

may 1, 1999

graduate school

oxford university

london

dear sir:

thank you for your email and kind offer! definitely, i would like to try to apply for a visa for the winter quarter. i understand that both you and professor black have tried very hard to help me with my situation and i appreciate your efforts.

as it is true that nobody really knows why the visa officers refuse certain applicants and allow others, i have been told by several successful visa reapplicants that reapplying with a new i20 with a slightly different offer from the us schools would help. for example, a slight increase in financial aid and so on. i don't know whether this is something possible for you to consider for my situation. but i would really appreciate if you could consider some possibilities. i know that i have given you enough trouble and please ignore my request if it is too difficult for you to do. i will simply try my best to get my visa and come to your school.

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